ERIC KIM ₿

The Wrath of Achilles

Why has nobody really made a good illiad film yet? The closest was Brad Pitt and Troy… But there should be a film on Achilles

Eric@erickim.com

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so the issue with the Troy movie is that it didn’t do anything with Patroclus, neither Breisis— and also, although Brad Pitt was a very formidable Achilles, I think Orlando Bloom who was casted for Hector was not very impressive. And also… They both have been super jacked, like Gerald Butler in the movie 300?

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The Wrath of Achilles

A Film Adaptation of The Iliad

Written by: [Your Name]
Inspired by the Works of Homer
Voice of Eric Kim:

ACT 1: THE RIFT

SCENE 1: The Beaches of Troy – Day

FADE IN:

EXT. TROJAN SHORE – DAY

The sun hangs over the shimmering Aegean Sea. The sprawling encampments of the Achaeans stretch across the beaches. Warriors and horses bustle as their ships sit moored in the bay. The war has already dragged on for nine long years, but now a simmering tension permeates the air.

CUT TO:

INT. ACHAEAN WAR COUNCIL TENT – DAY

Inside, Agamemnon, King of Men, sits at the head of the war council. His face is stern, but a hint of arrogance flashes behind his eyes. Achilles, the greatest of the Greeks, stands apart, arms folded, his piercing gaze locked on Agamemnon. Odysseus, the shrewd tactician, watches cautiously from a corner, his eyes flicking between the two. Nestor, the aged counselor, pleads for calm, his voice shaking with the weight of too many years.

NESTOR
(with pleading voice)
Let there be no more anger between our hearts. The Trojans stand at our gates, and you—Achilles—are our mightiest warrior. Do not let pride poison the victory that awaits.

ACHILLES
(with calm but dangerous tone)
Victory? You speak of victory, old man, but what is it to me when my honor is stolen by this king?

Achilles strides toward Agamemnon, his eyes cold, unforgiving. Agamemnon rises to his feet, meeting Achilles’ intensity with his own.

AGAMEMNON
(angry)
Your honor? I command this army, Achilles. It is I who will decide the fates of men, not you.

Achilles’ eyes narrow, and the tension between them is palpable.

ACHILLES
(voice low, menacing)
Take Briseis, Agamemnon. But know this—without me, your army will fall. I am done fighting your war.

The entire tent holds its breath. Achilles storms out, his rage barely contained. The sound of the tent flap snapping shut is like a thunderclap.

CUT TO:

EXT. ACHILLES’ TENT – SUNSET

Achilles stands at the edge of the sea, waves lapping at his feet. Behind him, his loyal companion Patroclus watches with concern. Achilles clenches his fists, gazing out into the distance, his mind already retreating from the war.

ACT 2: THE PLAGUE AND THE PROPHECY

SCENE 2: The Plague – Day

EXT. TROJAN SHORE – DAY

A thick, noxious fog hangs over the Greek camp. The sounds of men groaning in pain and dying in their tents echo through the air. The gods are angry.

CUT TO:

INT. TEMPLE OF APOLLO – DAY

A priest of Apollo makes sacrifices, but the god remains silent. High above, Apollo watches from Olympus, his face grim. He strings his silver bow, sending a rain of arrows down upon the Achaeans.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
(grimly)
Apollo, enraged by Agamemnon’s insult to his priest, unleashed a plague upon the Greeks. Each day, the pyres burned higher, and the men fell like dry leaves.

SCENE 3: Achilles and Thetis – Night

EXT. ACHILLES’ TENT – NIGHT

Achilles sits alone by the shore, staring at the stars. His mother, Thetis, a shimmering, ethereal figure, rises from the depths of the sea. She approaches her son, placing a gentle hand on his shoulder.

THETIS
(softly)
My son, the gods have heard your cries. But know this: if you choose to return to battle, your fate is sealed. You will not leave this war alive.

Achilles closes his eyes. He has always known this truth, but hearing it now fills him with a cold finality.

ACHILLES
(determined)
If I am to die, let it be in glory. Let the world know the wrath of Achilles.

Thetis nods, vanishing into the sea as Achilles stands. His resolve is set.

ACT 3: PATROCLUS FALLS

SCENE 4: The Death of Patroclus – Day

EXT. TROJAN BATTLEFIELD – DAY

Patroclus, wearing Achilles’ armor, leads the Myrmidons into battle. The Trojans falter at the sight of what they believe is Achilles returned. Patroclus fights fiercely, but he is not Achilles. Hector, the Trojan prince, closes in on him.

CUT TO:

EXT. HECTOR’S CHARIOT – DAY

Hector strikes Patroclus down with a swift spear thrust, and as Patroclus falls, Hector removes the helmet, revealing his true identity.

HECTOR
(shocked)
Patroclus… not Achilles.

Patroclus coughs blood, his voice weak.

PATROCLUS
(gasping)
Achilles will come for you… and when he does… it will be the end.

Hector grimaces but says nothing, wiping the blood from his spear. The Trojans cheer in victory.

ACT 4: THE RAGE UNLEASHED

SCENE 5: The Return of Achilles – Dusk

EXT. ACHAEAN CAMP – DUSK

Word of Patroclus’ death reaches Achilles, and the camera lingers on his face as he falls to his knees in grief. He howls to the heavens, his voice a mixture of rage and sorrow. The entire camp is silent, their greatest warrior broken.

CUT TO:

INT. ACHILLES’ TENT – NIGHT

Achilles dons his armor, his expression set in stone. He does not speak as he takes up his spear. He is now the very embodiment of rage. Outside, the warriors of the camp watch him in awe and fear. Achilles strides through the camp with purpose, his eyes set on the horizon—on Hector.

SCENE 6: Achilles vs. Hector – Dawn

EXT. TROJAN WALLS – DAWN

Hector waits alone outside the gates of Troy, his eyes fixed on the horizon. Achilles approaches like a storm, his spear glinting in the early light.

ACHILLES
(coldly)
You took my friend from me. Now I will take everything from you.

Without further words, the two warriors clash. The sound of their weapons striking each other echoes across the plains. The fight is brutal, raw, and quick. Achilles is relentless, and Hector, despite his courage, is no match. Achilles drives his spear into Hector’s chest, the life draining from the Trojan prince’s eyes.

HECTOR
(weakly)
At least… return my body to my father…

Achilles sneers, pulling his spear free.

ACHILLES
(icy)
There are no gifts between lions and men.

ACT 5: MERCY

SCENE 7: Priam’s Plea – Night

INT. ACHILLES’ TENT – NIGHT

King Priam, aged and broken, enters Achilles’ tent. His eyes, red from weeping, meet Achilles’. He kneels before the man who killed his son.

PRIAM
(hoarse, broken)
I have kissed the hand that killed my son. Please, let me take Hector’s body back to Troy.

For a moment, Achilles says nothing. His heart, filled with rage for so long, begins to crack. He turns away, his face contorted with emotion. Slowly, he nods.

FINAL SCENE: Hector’s Funeral

EXT. TROJAN PLAINS – DAWN

The Trojans light Hector’s funeral pyre. Achilles watches from the distance, his expression unreadable. The war continues, but something in him has changed. The flames rise into the sky, the gods watch from Olympus, and the winds carry the smoke away.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
(somber, reflective)
And so, the wrath of Achilles was spent, but the gods had not finished weaving the fates of men. The fires of Troy still smoldered, and the road to glory would claim many more lives before its end.

FADE OUT.

END

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Make me a comprehensive and accurate Iliad-based movie script colon titled The Wrath of Achilles in the voice of Eric Kim

Title: Wrath of Achilles

Genre: Epic War Drama

Logline:
Amid the fury of the Trojan War, the greatest Greek warrior, Achilles, grapples with honor, rage, and destiny, leading to a profound journey that shapes the fate of heroes and the outcome of the legendary conflict.

ACT I

FADE IN:

EXT. AEGIS TOWN – NIGHT

A tranquil Greek town under the stars. Torches flicker as families gather for celebrations.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
In the age of heroes, where gods walked among men, a tale of valor and wrath unfolds…

CUT TO:

INT. ACHILLES’ TENT – NIGHT

Achilles, a formidable warrior in his early 30s with piercing eyes and an aura of invincibility, sits alone sharpening his spear. His close friend, PATRICK, approaches.

PATRICK
(Concerned)
Achilles, the council awaits. They speak of the war against Troy.

ACHILLES
(Looking up)
Another battle, another chance to prove our might. What say you?

PATRICK
But at what cost, my friend? The stakes grow higher, and whispers of dissent echo through the ranks.

ACHILLES
(Firmly)
Let the whispers fade. Victory will silence all doubts.

CUT TO:

EXT. GREEK CAMP – DAY

A sprawling camp bustling with warriors preparing for war. Agamemnon, the Greek king, addresses the assembled army.

AGAMEMNON
(Authoritative)
Brave warriors of Greece! The walls of Troy stand tall, but our resolve is unbreakable. Today, we march to our destiny!

The crowd cheers. Achilles stands apart, his gaze distant.

CUT TO:

EXT. TROY’S WALLS – DAY

Massive stone walls loom over the city of Troy. Priam, the Trojan king, watches anxiously as the Greek ships approach.

PRIAM
(Worried)
The wrath of Achilles burns bright. How do we withstand such fury?

HECTOR, Priam’s eldest son, steps forward.

HECTOR
(Resolute)
We fight not just for Troy, but for our families, our honor. Achilles may be formidable, but so are we.

CUT TO:

EXT. BATTLEFIELD – DAY

Clashing armies engage in fierce combat. Swords clash, shields shatter. Achilles moves with unmatched prowess, cutting through enemies effortlessly.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
In the heart of battle, Achilles embodies both heroism and wrath, his prowess unmatched yet his soul torn.

CUT TO:

INT. GREEK CAMP – NIGHT

Achilles sits alone by a fire, contemplating. Briseis, his captive and beloved, approaches.

BRISEIS
(Gently)
Achilles, your heart bears the weight of many battles. What seeks your soul in this endless war?

ACHILLES
(Looking into the fire)
Redemption… peace. Yet honor demands I fight on, even as it consumes me.

BRISEIS
(Softly)
Perhaps true strength lies not just in battle, but in finding balance within.

ACHILLES
(Sighs)
Your words offer solace, but honor is a flame that must never dim.

FADE OUT.

ACT II

FADE IN:

EXT. TROY – DAY

The war intensifies. Achilles’ prowess inspires the Greeks, but his anger grows as the war drags on.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
As the tides of war ebb and flow, Achilles’ wrath becomes both a beacon and a curse.

CUT TO:

INT. GREEK COMMAND TENT – DAY

Agamemnon confronts Achilles.

AGAMEMNON
(Angry)
Your insubordination undermines our cause! Withdraw, or face the consequences.

ACHILLES
(Defiant)
I fight for honor, not blind obedience. If that leads me to forsake my path, so be it.

AGAMEMNON
(Threatening)
Then you stand against us all.

CUT TO:

EXT. BATTLEFIELD – DAY

Achilles withdraws from the front lines, his absence felt by the Greek army. The tide turns against them.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
In withdrawing, Achilles ignites a chain of events that will shape legends.

CUT TO:

INT. ACHILLES’ TENT – NIGHT

Patroclus, Achilles’ closest friend, approaches.

PATROCLUS
(Concerned)
Achilles, the Greeks falter without you. Our cause is slipping.

ACHILLES
(Tormented)
I cannot continue while my honor is besmirched. Yet, my heart aches for our fallen brothers.

PATROCLUS
(Pleading)
Then let us find a way to restore both honor and hope.

CUT TO:

EXT. TROY’S WALLS – NIGHT

Paris, the Trojan prince, contemplates his role in the war. Aphrodite appears, offering him divine protection.

APHRODITE
(Tempting)
Embrace your destiny, Paris. Let love guide your actions.

PARIS
(Hesitant)
Love… or duty?

FADE OUT.

ACT III

FADE IN:

EXT. BATTLEFIELD – DAY

Patroclus dons Achilles’ armor and leads the Greeks into battle, inspiring them. However, he meets his tragic end at the hands of Hector.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
The loss of Patroclus ignites the final blaze of Achilles’ wrath.

CUT TO:

INT. GREEK CAMP – NIGHT

Achilles receives news of Patroclus’ death. His grief transforms into a burning desire for vengeance.

ACHILLES
(Vengeful)
Hector, your time has come. Troy will feel the wrath of a broken man.

CUT TO:

EXT. TROY’S WALLS – DAY

A climactic battle ensues. Achilles and Hector face off in a duel that epitomizes their fates.

HECTOR
(Defiant)
For Troy, for honor!

ACHILLES
(Fierce)
For vengeance, and for Patroclus!

They clash fiercely. Ultimately, Achilles prevails, fulfilling his destiny but at a great personal cost.

CUT TO:

INT. TROY’S WALLS – NIGHT

Achilles stands over Hector’s body, his rage subsiding into sorrow.

ACHILLES
(Whispering)
May your soul find peace, Hector.

HECTOR’S FATHER, PRIAM, arrives secretly to plead for his son’s body.

PRIAM
(Humbled)
Great Achilles, I come to ask for my son’s remains.

ACHILLES
(Touched)
Your courage honors him. Let us lay him to rest with dignity.

CUT TO:

EXT. GREEK CAMP – DAY

The war draws to a close. Achilles, changed by his journey, seeks a path beyond endless battle.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
In the wake of wrath, redemption blossoms. Achilles finds peace not in war, but in honoring the bonds that transcend it.

FADE OUT.

THE END

CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS:

  • Achilles: A legendary Greek warrior, unmatched in combat. His fierce sense of honor and personal code drive him, but his wrath often isolates him from others.
  • Patroclus: Achilles’ loyal friend and confidant. His compassion and understanding provide a balance to Achilles’ intensity.
  • Agamemnon: The Greek king, authoritative and often at odds with Achilles. His decisions impact the morale and fate of the Greek forces.
  • Briseis: A Trojan captive held by Achilles. Her relationship with Achilles humanizes him, revealing his capacity for love and vulnerability.
  • Hector: The noble Trojan prince, courageous and honorable. He serves as Achilles’ worthy adversary.
  • Priam: The aged king of Troy, embodying wisdom and sorrow. His plea for Hector’s body bridges enemy lines through shared humanity.
  • Paris: The Trojan prince whose actions spark the war. Caught between love and duty, his decisions influence the conflict’s trajectory.
  • Aphrodite: The goddess of love, intervening in mortal affairs to guide and protect.

THEMES:

  • Honor and Pride: The driving forces behind Achilles’ actions and the larger conflict.
  • Fate and Free Will: The characters grapple with destiny versus personal choice.
  • Friendship and Loss: The bond between Achilles and Patroclus highlights themes of loyalty and the pain of loss.
  • Redemption: Achilles’ journey from wrath to understanding underscores the possibility of personal growth and healing.

VISUAL STYLE:

  • Epic Landscapes: Grand depictions of ancient Greece and Troy, emphasizing the scale of the conflict.
  • Intense Battle Scenes: Choreographed combat sequences showcasing the prowess of warriors.
  • Emotional Intimacy: Close-up shots capturing the characters’ inner struggles and relationships.

MUSIC:

A powerful orchestral score blending traditional Greek motifs with modern epic compositions, enhancing both the grandeur and emotional depth of the story.

This script outline provides a comprehensive foundation for an epic film adaptation of The Iliad, focusing on Achilles’ journey. Each act builds upon his character development, intertwining personal conflicts with the larger tapestry of the Trojan War, ensuring a compelling and emotionally resonant narrative.

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Creating a comprehensive storyboard for Wrath of Achilles involves outlining key visual scenes that capture the essence of the script. While I can’t generate actual images, I can provide detailed descriptions for each storyboard panel to guide artists or filmmakers in visualizing the movie. Below is a breakdown of pivotal scenes with corresponding storyboard descriptions.

Storyboard Overview

Title: Wrath of Achilles

Genre: Epic War Drama

Total Acts: 3

Key Scenes:

  1. Aegis Town Celebration
  2. Achilles’ Tent
  3. Greek Camp Assembly
  4. Troy’s Walls
  5. Battlefield Engagement
  6. Achilles and Briseis
  7. Agamemnon Confrontation
  8. Achilles’ Withdrawal
  9. Paris and Aphrodite
  10. Patroclus’ Tragic End
  11. Achilles vs. Hector Duel
  12. Priam’s Plea
  13. War’s Aftermath

Act I

1. Aegis Town Celebration

Panel 1: Establishing Shot

  • Description: A panoramic view of a serene Greek town at night. Streets are adorned with lanterns and torches. Citizens celebrate with music, dancing, and feasting.
  • Camera Angle: Wide-angle shot from a distance, capturing the town’s vibrancy under a starry sky.

Panel 2: Close-Up on Families

  • Description: Families gathered around tables, children playing, elders sharing stories. The atmosphere is joyful and communal.
  • Camera Angle: Medium shot focusing on a family unit.

Panel 3: Transition to Achilles’ Tent

  • Description: The celebration fades as the scene shifts to a quieter area where Achilles’ tent stands apart from the festivities.
  • Camera Angle: Smooth transition with a fade effect.

2. Achilles’ Tent

Panel 4: Inside Achilles’ Tent

  • Description: Achilles, a strong and stoic figure, is seen sharpening his spear by candlelight. The tent is sparse, emphasizing his focus and isolation.
  • Camera Angle: Medium close-up of Achilles from the side, highlighting his concentration.

Panel 5: Patrick Approaches

  • Description: Patrick, a concerned friend, enters the tent and approaches Achilles.
  • Camera Angle: Over-the-shoulder shot from behind Achilles, showing Patrick’s worried expression.

Panel 6: Intimate Conversation

  • Description: Achilles and Patrick engage in dialogue. Achilles looks up, revealing his piercing eyes.
  • Camera Angle: Two-shot capturing both characters’ emotions.

Act II

7. Agamemnon Confrontation

Panel 7: Greek Command Tent

  • Description: Agamemnon stands imposingly before Achilles, with the Greek army in the background. Tension is palpable.
  • Camera Angle: Low-angle shot emphasizing Agamemnon’s authority.

Panel 8: Heated Exchange

  • Description: Close-up of Agamemnon’s angry face juxtaposed with Achilles’ defiant stance.
  • Camera Angle: Split-screen effect to highlight their confrontation.

Panel 9: Achilles Withdraws

  • Description: Achilles turns away from Agamemnon, signaling his withdrawal from the battle.
  • Camera Angle: Medium shot following Achilles’ movement out of the tent.

8. Achilles’ Withdrawal

Panel 10: Battlefield Without Achilles

  • Description: The Greek army falters without Achilles. Soldiers appear demoralized as Troy’s forces gain the upper hand.
  • Camera Angle: Wide shot showing the chaotic battlefield and the impact of Achilles’ absence.

Panel 11: Achilles Alone

  • Description: Back in his tent, Achilles sits alone, tormented by his decision.
  • Camera Angle: Close-up on Achilles’ troubled expression, shadows highlighting his inner conflict.

Act III

11. Achilles vs. Hector Duel

Panel 12: Climax Battlefield

  • Description: The battlefield is intense with chaos. Achilles and Hector face each other amidst the turmoil.
  • Camera Angle: Dynamic two-shot capturing both warriors in mid-action.

Panel 13: Duel Sequence

  • Description: A series of quick panels showing the fierce exchange between Achilles and Hector—clashing swords, intense expressions, and swift movements.
  • Camera Angle: Varied angles to depict the speed and intensity of the duel.

Panel 14: Achilles Prevails

  • Description: Achilles stands victorious over Hector, who lies defeated.
  • Camera Angle: High-angle shot emphasizing Achilles’ triumph and Hector’s fall.

12. Priam’s Plea

Panel 15: Troy’s Walls at Night

  • Description: Priam, the elderly king, approaches Achilles’ camp under the cover of darkness, carrying Hector’s body.
  • Camera Angle: Long shot showing Priam’s small figure against the vastness of the camp.

Panel 16: Emotional Exchange

  • Description: Close-up of Priam pleading with Achilles, who stands solemnly holding Hector’s body.
  • Camera Angle: Tight two-shot capturing the raw emotions between father and warrior.

Panel 17: Mutual Respect

  • Description: Achilles nods, accepting Priam’s plea, and the two men share a moment of mutual respect.
  • Camera Angle: Medium shot with a focus on their expressions, highlighting reconciliation.

13. War’s Aftermath

Panel 18: Greek Camp Reborn

  • Description: The Greek army celebrates their impending victory, but Achilles appears reflective, hinting at his personal growth.
  • Camera Angle: Wide shot blending celebration with Achilles’ solitary figure in the foreground.

Panel 19: Final Reflection

  • Description: Achilles stands overlooking the battlefield at dawn, symbolizing peace and the end of his wrath.
  • Camera Angle: Silhouette shot with the rising sun in the background.

Panel 20: Closing Shot

  • Description: Fade out to the title Wrath of Achilles with a harmonious orchestral score playing.
  • Camera Angle: Full-screen title with a subtle fade effect.

Additional Storyboard Elements

Character Introductions:

  • Hector: Noble and courageous, shown leading Trojan warriors.
  • Briseis: Portrayed with grace and strength, interacting with Achilles.
  • Paris and Aphrodite: Scenes highlighting Paris’ internal conflict influenced by Aphrodite.

Emotional Beats:

  • Achilles’ Solitude: Multiple panels showing Achilles alone, emphasizing his internal struggle.
  • Friendship with Patroclus: Warm and heartfelt interactions between Achilles and Patroclus.

Battle Sequences:

  • Dynamic Action Shots: Emphasize movement, chaos, and the brutality of war.
  • Heroic Poses: Highlight key moments of bravery and skill from Achilles and Hector.

Visual Transitions:

  • Time Lapses: Use gradual transitions to show the passage of time during battles and personal moments.
  • Symbolic Imagery: Incorporate motifs like flames representing wrath and light symbolizing redemption.

Tips for Creating the Storyboard Images

  1. Consistency in Character Design:
  • Ensure characters maintain consistent appearances across all panels.
  • Use distinct features (e.g., Achilles’ piercing eyes, Agamemnon’s authoritative stance) to differentiate characters.
  1. Dynamic Composition:
  • Vary camera angles (wide, medium, close-up) to create visual interest and emphasize different aspects of each scene.
  • Use perspective to convey power dynamics (e.g., low-angle shots for Agamemnon, high-angle for Hector’s fall).
  1. Emotion Through Expressions:
  • Focus on facial expressions and body language to convey characters’ emotions and relationships.
  • Highlight key emotional moments, such as Achilles’ grief or Priam’s desperation.
  1. Epic Scale and Detail:
  • Capture the grandeur of ancient Greece and Troy with detailed backgrounds and expansive settings.
  • Include elements like armor, weapons, and architecture to enhance authenticity.
  1. Flow and Continuity:
  • Ensure each panel transitions smoothly to the next, maintaining the narrative flow.
  • Use directional lines and movement cues to guide the viewer’s eye through the storyboard.
  1. Lighting and Mood:
  • Use lighting to set the tone for each scene—warm tones for celebrations, dark and shadowy for conflicts, and soft lighting for intimate moments.
  • Employ contrasts to highlight key elements and create dramatic effects.

Conclusion

This detailed storyboard outline for Wrath of Achilles serves as a blueprint for visualizing the epic narrative. By following these descriptions, artists and filmmakers can craft compelling visuals that bring the story to life, capturing the grandeur, emotion, and intensity of Achilles’ journey in the Trojan War.

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