Street Photography Weekly Assignment #6: “Emotion” Winners

by Eric Kim on August 3, 2012

1x1.trans Street Photography Weekly Assignment #6: Emotion Winners

(Winning Photo: Michael Meinhardt)

Eric: Congratulations to Michael Meinhardt for winning last week’s weekly assignment: “Emotion“. The reason I thought that this photo was the winning photograph was for several reasons.

First of all, I feel that the emotion in Michael’s shot it is an emotion we can all relate with (envy, jealousy, and lust) related with material things (cars especially). The fact that it is a really high-end car (Bently) adds to the feeling of desire, and the man’s positioning in the frame is great (on the right) and the expression with his hands. Slouched over, dejected, having his hand over his eye in a look of despair. His balding hair suggests that he has been working for a while (as a middle-aged man), and the watch on the right hand to me is a symbol of his material wants (and running out of time?). The background reflections are quite beautiful aesthetically as well, and shows all the other people walking past him.

1x1.trans Street Photography Weekly Assignment #6: Emotion Winners

2nd place image: Digoy Isleta

The second-runner up is Digoy Isleta. The reason I enjoy this image is because of the great layers, depth, and (of course) emotion contained in the shot. The shot feels very three-dimensional, and has many things going on. First of all, the woman in the background looks lost and is grasping a mysterious hand coming out of the shadows (to show hope?) There is another random hand waving above her head, maybe to suggest for her to wake up and exit her daze? Also you one kid on the left (wearing the superman shirt) looking at her – perhaps a superman to save her? And the last boy on the far left, with his arm around the superman girl is looking straight at the photographer, making you feel like an active participant of the scene, rather than a voyeur.

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3rd runner-up: Longwen Chen

The last winning shot is a photo by Longwen Chen that feels quite dystopic and surreal. The strong grain and grit makes for a nice backdrop, including the mysterious lines and shadows lurking from behind. I first see a young boy in the far left, screaming out – perhaps for his mother? Then enters the man on the left, who is giving a menacing stare to the photographer. He seems to ignore the child on the right (or seems unaware of him) and is exiting the frame. The man’s legs in a “V” shape adds to the composition of the photo. The tilt of the photo distracts me a bit (would have preferred it straighter) – but at the same time it adds to the uneasiness of the image.

Congratulations to all the winners, and keep updated for next week’s assignment on my Facebook fan page! Let us also know what you think of the winning shots by leaving a comment below!  

  • Jean-Pierre

    Congrats to the three! My favorite is the third actually.

  • Chipdog

    2nd place is by far the best in my books

  • http://www.facebook.com/george.matzkov George Matzkov

    2nd place for me also is my fave as there is so much going on. 1st place looks a little posed for me.. congrats to all.

  • Rakstar Terminator

    The first one has no impact cant believe this is the winner what happened? The second one is the best among the 3. No need to explain.

    • http://erickimphotography.com/blog Eric Kim

      Dear Rakstar – thanks for sharing your opinion! Perhaps let us know why you prefer #2?

  • Michael Ares

    Yea #2 should have won. #1 looks like a guy just rubbing his eye.

  • Michael Meinhardt

    Wow, all those haters. I never expected you. Welcome to my life! :)

    First of all, I am very happy to have won this assignment. And like some of you I look at the other pictures and think, they are pretty good, too.

    I do like #2 because it is stronger in terms of raw emotion. There is obviously fear or sadness in those faces.

    But here is the thing: we never find out why. There is no context. There is no story.

    The same is true for #3. That boy is shouting something. What? Why? At whom?

    What sets #1 apart is a story line, a narrative that connects the subject with his environment. And yes, he did rub his eyes. But not in the way you rub your eyes when the wind blew some dirt into them. That person is a street musician. His accordeon is sitting on the sidewalk just out of frame. When I walked by he was taking a break from playing and resting his head in his hand for a long time. It was a mixture of fatigue, despair and sadness. And that is what spoke to me.

    There were a lot of wealthy people around him. Those able to buy Bentleys for example. And there he was, all alone, with a few coins in his pocket. That was the moment and that is the story. Not all of it is contained in the picture, of course. But there is enough to get the point across. And that’s why it’s #1.

    • http://erickimphotography.com/blog Eric Kim

      Dear Michael – it is nice that you responded to everyone’s feedback – but wouldn’t call them “haters”. They were simply giving their honest feedback- don’t think any of it was mean-spirited!

      • Michael

        Hi Eric, I wasn’t serious. I know they are not really hating on me. And even if they were, that’s completely valid. :)

        I find all of this quite entertaining and educational. Actually, I like the discourse and the different opinions. Keeps things real and raw.

        However, I also think we as photographers need to up the game and keep developing our craft to keep things moving forward and up (preferably), which is why I felt the need to comment on the lack of story lines in the competing images. It is one thing to capture emotions. It is quite another to tell the story of their origin at the same time.

        • http://twitter.com/twocutedogs twocutedogs

          Mıchael – as I mentıoned above. From my perspectıve of the ımage your story ıs a lıe. Better to have a vıewer draw theır own conclusıons (as they wıll do ın number 2) than to force a conclusıon on someone through elements ın the frame that do not connect as a narratıve.

          • Michael

            The story “could” be lie, yes. But how likely is that? The guy isn’t blind. He knows that there is a 250,000 dollar automobile behind that glass and he knows that he has trouble making ends meet. I really don’t think there is a big stretch in connecting these two ideas.

          • http://twitter.com/twocutedogs twocutedogs

            Hmmm. Not beıng able to afford a Bentley? 99 per cent of the world cannot afford a Bentley. Hardly cause for any emotıonal reactıon. Only a chıld would react emotıonally to not beıng able to ahve somethıng.

          • Michael

            Alright Charlie, I’m done arguing. :D

            Hell, photography is so subjective. Half of the pictures I take, I don’t even know why people like them – or why they hate the ones I love. I’m only beginning to figure all this out.

            All you can do is work on it and get better, while staying true to yourself. A fine line to walk for sure.

            Thanks for your opinion!

    • Antonio Inoki

      No offense, but if you can’t take criticism, you won’t do very well in this hobby. If that’s how defensive you feel then stick to showing your pictures to family and close friends that will tell you how awesome they are and “like” them on facebook. Sorry if that comes across as blunt.

      When you need two paragraphs to explain the story, it means that you weren’t able to express it properly on the picture. The man looks like a middle aged middle class man. Furthermore, to explain your story you refer to elements that are not in the picture (the accordion, the wealthy people) and your own assumptions. I think this man probably has got bigger problems than buying a Bentley really. It looks like you had a good idea but couldn’t execute it properly.

      • Michael

        But that’s my point exactly. I love the criticism! You don’t really think I submitted my image with the certainty of winning, do you? I wanted to hear what other people think about it. That was the idea. I am just happy to have won. It’s a bonus, not the goal.

        I’m a member of a street photography critiquing site here on Facebook, which is also run by Eric. There I post pictures almost every day and get my ass handed to me by other photographers. You have no idea how helpful this is when you open up to it.

        However, I stand by my conviction that my image in this assignment was the only one with a compelling story. Or any story for that matter. And that’s what I’m shooting for as a photographer. That’s the goal.

        • Antonio Inoki

          Hey, it’s all good, and it’s great that you are being a good sport about it. The first few words on your post are misleading, after all, this is teh internets and we can’t see your face or your tone of voice denoting sarcasm when you said it.

          • Michael

            Thanks for understanding, Antonio! I try to use smilies in the right places, but it’s hopeless. :)

            Imagine if someone finally invented a failsafe way of conveying emotion in text. What a market! :)

    • ILPARM

      lulz!

  • http://twitter.com/twocutedogs twocutedogs

    not really a fan of the wınner eıther ı am afraıd. ı fınd the colour combınatıon quıte ugly and ı feel the photographer ıs too far away to adequately express the emotıon on the guys face. the ımage ıs flat. the top thırd of the photo ıs redundant (we know the car ıs an expensıve one so no need to ınclude the bentley sıgn). the mass of people ın the reflectıon ıs cluttered. havıng spent the summer ın ıstanbul – ı see thıs type of scene very often. usually a result of the stıflıng heat.

    the second ımage has many flaws aswell, but there ıs more to look at ıt the frame. ıt ıs full and contaıns some semblance of a narratıve. there ıs a dynamıc feel to thıs photo – wıth the eyes lookıng ın varıous dırectıons.

    • http://erickimphotography.com/blog Eric Kim

      Thanks for the feedback Charlie! One of the biggest reasons I chose #1 that were similar to my personal experiences as well. Thanks for the in-depth commentary – see you soon mate!

      • http://twitter.com/twocutedogs twocutedogs

        no worrıes – the other poınt ı should have made was that the guy ıs facıng away from the car. as a result ı can only surmıse that ıt ıs coıncıdence that he ıs sıttıng there wıth that expressıon. ıf he were facıng the car then there would be a strong causal lınk. ı thınk that when a photographer aıms to show a connectıon between aspects of the frame (asıde from juxtaposıtıonal ımages) that aım to show emotıon he should show the real cause rather than a fıctıtıous or coıncıdental one. shots lıke thıs are tellıng a false story and ınvıte the reader to make the wrong conclusıon. all photos are lıes but some are better lıes than others.

        • http://erickimphotography.com/blog Eric Kim

          Thanks for the feedback – your last line: “all photos are lıes but some are better lıes than others.” is a great one.

  • Chopper

    I don’t believe the problem of the person in the first photo is money or things to have. Let’s see the belly of the model. What he needs is the bike on a reflection in the window. The car makes people looking ugly.

    In my opinion, people tend to look at or think about something from their experience. I’ve read all articles here and seen so many photos called street photography for a long time, and found out many street photographers don’t even know themselves what they took, however mimicing cheapy emotion on the internet. As you may know, I was disappointed by the emotion of a person who picked that photo as the first place.

    I suggest people study drawing or painting for having a good composition and color, and study philosophy.

    And.. I didn’t apply any photo for this assignment don’t get me wrong

    • http://erickimphotography.com/blog Eric Kim

      Thank you for your comment Chopper and your feedback.

      In my opinion I feel that a lot of judging in photography comes down to the personal bias of the judge. For example, I chose #1 as the winner because it struck a strong emotional chord with me based on my past experiences on having a strong desire of having nice cars. I think as someone from Los Angeles, I connect to this emotion of envy the most.

      Of course that isn’t everybody – and I appreciate your feedback and that of others!

  • Brent Silva

    Well, looking at the stuff Eric Kim shoots, no wonder such a lifeless picture like number 1 is the winner. Number two is superb in every way possible.

    Brent

    • http://erickimphotography.com/blog Eric Kim

      Dear Brent,

      Thank you for taking the time to leave your comment. However it would be more helpful to the community if you explained your opinion more. How does the photographs I shoot have a correlation with choosing #1 as the winner? And why do you call the #1 image lifeless? What aspects of it do you find lifeless? I love image #2 as well, but what do you mean it is “superb in every way possible?” Is it the composition, emotion you feel, or something else?

      Cheers,
      Eric

  • ILPARM

    I always have disliked images with that typical ambiguous pose where some random person is sitting in the street covering their face or looking down into the ground. Too often the “story” in these scenes is stretched by the photographer WAY too much. To me, this man looks like he is just taking a rest, or cleaning something out from his eye. If he was facing the car, if he was interacting with it in any way you would have a stronger case. As it is, said interaction does not exist and therefore the sad story of the man who cannot afford a penis implant only lives in the photographer’s head. Or maybe also in the heads of those with a materialist-driven character?

    In my opinion, reading these scenes as “guy is suffering for whatever thing I chose to use as juxta” is simplistic and too commonplace in the street photography world. You guys were talking about how some lies are better than others. I would say this one is a poorly told lie, one that I do not believe regardless of how good it might be.

    Second shot is better. At least the emotions shown there seem honest and real. It does not need some convoluted description to bring the point to the viewer. It is more dynamic, it has key information in different planes, it fills the frame better. Overall, a stronger shot.

  • ILPARM

    This girl is crying because she cannot have that tourist’s camera!

    http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6099/5908651033_b5c3d6f160_o.jpg

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